Graph planning

I've developed some plans for a graph or chart on the Number of Premature Deaths caused by different types of air pollution. I made some quick illustrations which would be patterns in the chart to help explain the different kinds of air pollution. Technical terms are used for classification but are difficult for the viewer to fully understand what the thing actualy is. This is why I developed illustrations. Any thoughts?

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I'm a sophomore at Herron School of Art and Design at IUPUI pursuing a degree in Visual Communication. This blog is dedicated to my research, activities, and findings related to my VC classes.